I put this crappy site up not only to state my opinions on writing, but to put up writing of mine I'm working on/just wrote, because I WANT it to be critiqued.

Don't tell me YOU like it. Don't tell me IT'S GOOD.

Tell me "I hated tht prt, Erik," or "you need to work on this part here," or "that was totally unclear you dueche bag."

thanks for all of your input. and frig if my A key doesn't work once the hell in a while.